Thanks for giving me the suggestion about my introduction part. I am wondering if there is something wrong with my main body as there is a big difference between my marks these two times.

sincer999 GMAT考生

Thank you very much John! Nice to talk to you again!
Before I receive your rate, I use conjunctions very frequently to boost my article's logic. Since I can no longer abuse them, I will find some other ways to promote my essay’s logicality. Could you offer me some advice?
And thanks for your attachment, but the only things I receive is a long serious of program code. Could you try again?
Good Luck!

流云居士 SAT考生

很负责很细致啊，我错得很多但老师一个个都指出来啦 感觉批改一次很值！最后的综合点评给我提出一些集中的问题和中肯建议，还附送了冠词用法，十分贴合我的所需。

小晴 SAT考生

这批改服务相当不错，批改的很到位，让我明白自己错在什么地方和可以怎么改进。不过评价上写说我的词汇使用不够所以达不到6分，是否说明我以这种程度的写作再加多些复杂的词汇就能到6，还是说不增加词汇而改进掉一部分的错误就能到6呢?不知道雅思的考官是否会像批改老师这么的仁慈。

shanshuo 雅思考生

被给我改作文的Robert先生感动的一塌糊涂，批得太仔细了！给我写了超长的评语（貌似有1000多字），不仅指出了我的错误 还教我怎样提高语言的方法，太贴心了！写的超级详细！在这里想特别谢谢这位外教老师，谢谢他的认真与严谨，希望下次还能遇到Robert先生的批改！！

tony TOEFL考生