GMAT Argument 21重新选题
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收起The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile manufacturing company to the company's managers:
“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began
donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”
Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. In your discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the conclusion. You can also discuss what sort of evidence would strengthen or refute the argument, what changes in the argument would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.
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研究表明当没有监管的时候,非盈利性慈善机构的员工们士气要比那些盈利性机构的更高。对非盈利性机构的员工采访揭示了之所以的原因是因为他们认为他们的工作促进了社会发展。真是因为他们相信他们工作的重要性,所以他们一直在竭尽全力,即便没有任何回报。因此,如果我们公司开始把我们利润的一大部分捐给人道主义机构,我们员工的热情和生产力将会提高,同时我们的利润也将会提升。