GRE Argument 58重新选题
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收起The vice president for human resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the company's president.
"In an effort to improve our employees' productivity, we should implement electronic monitoring of employees' Internet use from their workstations. Employees who use the Internet inappropriately from their workstations need to be identified and punished if we are to reduce the number of work hours spent on personal or recreational activities, such as shopping or playing games. Installing software on company computers to detect employees' Internet use is the best way to prevent employees from wasting time on the job. It will foster a better work ethic at Climpson and improve our overall profits."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
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为提高我们的员工的生产效率,我们应该在员工的电脑上加装电子监控来监视员工对互联网的使用。如果我们要减少用于私人以及娱乐活动,比如购物或玩游戏的工作时间,那些在电脑上不正当使用互联网的员工必须要被确认并且受到惩罚。通过在公司电脑上安装检测员工使用互联网的软件,我们可以防止员工浪费时间,并培养C公司更好的工作氛围,以及提高我们的整体利润。