1.结构提示

Generally speaking, I think it is beneficial for children to learn artistic skills at school, because...

As far as I am concerned, artistic skills can affect people's characters to some degree.

For example,...

2.要点提示

advantages: cultivate their interest in arts/don't have to pay extra money

disadvantages: too general/not individualised enough/some children may not be interested in artistic skills

the function of artistic skills/its influence on one's character