2011年10月 SAT美国东部考区作文题目重新选题
写作题目
收起Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
"Discipline" is a negative word for many people because it is associated with rigorous training, strict rules, and strong self-control. But we fail to realize that freedom comes only through discipline. Discipline compels us to sacrifice immediate rewards and pleasures, but it also gives our lives structure and prevents us from making costly mistakes. It keeps us from being subject to our impulses and weaknesses and thus frees us to achieve our true goals.
Do people need discipline to achieve freedom?
Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
答题辅导
收起1. 题目翻译:
对很多人来说,原则是一个负面词汇。因为它与严格的训练,严苛的规定和强烈的自我控制相联系。但是我们没有意识到自由只能来源于原则。原则迫使我们牺牲唾手可得的奖励和快乐,但是它也让我们生活的有条理,阻止我们犯代价很大的错误。它让我们不屈从于自己的本能和弱点,因此解放我们去追寻自己的真正目标。
题目:人们需要原则来获得自由吗?
2. 审题关键词:discipline, freedom
3. 论证分析-各段核心提纲:
正:Discipline restrains us from making irrational decisions. So we do not need to be controlled by others.
反:Discipline is the obstacle we set for ourselves. This way, we can never be truly free.
补:There is no such thing as absolute freedom. It will do more harm than good to society.