GMAT Argument 136重新选题
写作题目
收起The following appeared in a memorandum from the human resources department of HomeStyle, a house remodeling business:
“This year, despite HomeStyle’s move to new office space, we have seen a decline in both company morale and productivity, and a corresponding increase in administrative costs. To rectify these problems, we should begin using a newly developed software package for performance appraisal and feedback. Managers will save time by simply choosing comments from a preexisting list; then the software will automatically generate feedback for the employee. The human resources department at CounterBalance, the manufacturer of the countertops we install, reports satisfaction with the package.”
Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. In your discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the conclusion. You can also discuss what sort of evidence would strengthen or refute the argument, what changes in the argument would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.
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收起题目翻译
今年,不考虑HS搬迁到新工作地点的影响,我们看到公司的士气和生产力都有所下降,管理成本相应增加。为了扭转这些问题,我们应该开始使用新的开发软件包进行成绩评估和反馈。经理们将从现有表格上选取意见以节省时间。进而这个软件会自动生成给雇员的反馈。我们安装的工作台面的生产商Counter Balance的人力资源部对这个软件包很满意。