2006年01月 SAT美国西部考区作文题目重新选题
写作题目
收起Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below:
I do not feel terrible about my mistakes, though I grieve the pain they have sometimes caused others. Our lives are “experiments with truth,” and in an experiment negative results are lat least as important as successes. I have no idea how I would have learned the truth about myself and my calling without the mistakes I have made.
Adapted from Parker Palmer, Let You Life Speak
Is it necessary to make mistakes, even when doing so has negative consequences for other people?
Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
答题辅导
收起1. 题目翻译:
我并不为我的错误感到不安,尽管我有时为它带给他人的痛苦感到惭愧。我们的生活是真相的实验,在试验中,负面结果和成功一样重要。我不知道如果不是因为这些错误,我怎能认清自己和自己的人生。
题目:犯错是必要的吗?即使犯错有时会为别人带来负面影响。
2. 审题关键词:individual, community
3. 论证分析-各段核心提纲:
正:At least making mistakes means that you have tried. That is the first step towards success.
反:Making mistakes will strike your confidence and sometimes cause others problems.
补:With aging, people are more and more afraid of making mistakes. Thus, when encountering such people, we sometimes perceive them as heroes.