在这个问题上，大多数申请者都是采用的模板进行套用的，但是如果不是时间紧急的话，hioffer建议大家不要采取套用模板的方式，而是根据以下三个方向去寻找相关的素材：

       1 学校的历史，声誉，氛围特色：几乎每所学校都会有这样的介绍

       2 系的历史，声誉，办学宗旨

       3 你感兴趣的教授

       具体我们来看以下的几个例子：

Thereforewhen I will complete my undergraduate studies, under the recommendation of myprofessors, and after I carefully reviewed the website of University ofAlabama, I decided on your esteemed university. Firstly, I am attracted by your long and worthy traditions. Just as your former president said: “No one can help but be aware of the rich tradition that is associated with this team and this University.”Secondly, the University recognizes the importance of educating students to live and work in a global community of increasingly interdependent countries. Thirdly, The Department of Communication Studies at The University of Alabama is committed to excellence in teaching, research, and service and to diversity in thought, action,  and participation. Fourthly,Communication Studies does not train students for a specific job; rather, it prepares them to excel in whatever careers they choose by teaching them to think critically, to express and advocate ideas effectively, and to understand and appreciate the diversity of human communication practices. Finally, the department's curriculumis guided by the principle that theory and practice are complementary and mutually reinforcing aspects of study.

       这一段中，我们可以看到清楚地看到申请者是认真阅读了学校的网页之后做出的选择。

       第一点，她提到了学校的传统；

       第二点，提到了学校的教育模式；

       第三四点，提到了系里面的教育风格；

       第五点，提及了课程设置。

       而这些学校的特色都是可以通过学校的网页获得，然后进行总结的。如果在时间充足的情况下，建议大家不要采取套用模板的方式，那样的方式起码对申请是没有任何帮助的。