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推荐信写作晋级之推荐信的结构

作者:互联网 来源:互联网 2014-01-24

摘要:

       作者结合具体的推荐信案例分析推荐信应该包含的内容和结构。

       内容主要包括:推荐人和申请者之间的关系;两人认识时间、经过;申请者的哪些素质给推荐人留下了深刻的印象。

       从结构来看,总体和具体段落的结构具有三种:总分总结构;总分结构;分总结构。


在推荐信入门中已经提到过从内容来看,推荐信包括以下几个部分:

1、推荐人和申请者之间的关系;

2、两人认识时间、经过;

3、申请者的哪些素质给推荐人留下了深刻的印象。


从结构来看,总体和具体段落的结构具有三种:

1、总分总结构;

2、总分结构;

3、分总结构。


下面我们就从这两个方面来分析以下这封推荐信:

To whom it may concern:

I take great pleasure in recommending Miss## for acceptance into your prodigious university. As her undergraduate advisor,(点出两人关系-班主任和学生) I had known her for nearly four years(点出认识的时间,说明十分的了解她). I am very delighted to recommend such a promising girl as a worthy candidate for admission and financial aids to your graduate school(表明态度:强力推荐). In this letter I would like to share with you my perspectives on this exceptional young lady.


总:她是一个全面发展的人――学业和课外

Miss ## strikes a balance in academic and extracurricular activities, which is rarely seen in university students. From an education perspective, I think ## is the type of student who can go far and broad as an integrated human being to fulfill academic mission and social responsibility.


分:第一段直接阐述学业

When I taught her ##(课程), (分1)unlike many students loafing time in heavy complaintsabout the boring stuff, she was (active的体现)self-disciplined with the fundamentals and made step-by-step progress. She was also (分2)self-navigated(active的体现). In addition to class assignments, she proactivelybroadened herself asking for extra reading list from me.(active的结果 )Naturally, she got good scores of 91 and 92 pointsrespectively. In the meantime, she has obtained a macro view on the developmentof the schools of economics and the trend of thought, which will establishsolid basis for her future research in economics field.


分:第一段 直接阐述学业

When I taught her ##(课程), (分1)unlike many students loafing time in heavy complaints about the boring stuff, she was (active的体现)self-disciplined with the fundamentals and made step-by-step progress. She was also (分2) self-navigated(active的体现). In addition to class assignments, she proactively broadened herself asking for extra reading list from me.(active的结果 )Naturally, she got good scores of 91 and 92 points respectively. In the meantime, she has obtained a macro view on the development of the schools of economics and the trend of thought, which will establish solid basis for her future research in economics field.


分:第二段 阐述课外活动

Besides her academic activities, I also attracted by her social activities and

capabilities(总). She did great job as chairwoman of the student union committee on two large events campus wide. I was so surprised that this innocent girl could even persuade the sophisticated business leaders to sponsor the events. What was more surprising was that so many volunteers would follow her in the events.

Moreover, I called her a leader because I manifested that she led the schoolmates out of the ego self to a grand self, to contribute to the social welfare.She was usually good at motivating people. Miss## launched a volunteer program to teach in the School for Blind of ××. Despite pressure from huge academic assignments and tremendous campus activities, ××persisted to lead the volunteer program and to teach the blind teenagers herself for two years. I asked her what buttress her hard work on this project. She said that it was the emotion to share knowledge and the zeal to illuminate the dark world.


总:

All the observation on ×× in closeness leads to the conclusion that she is both a candidate qualified for your graduate program towards a higher degree and a citizen that will impact the communities in neighborhood with knowledge and enthusiasm. If you need more information concerning her, please contact me freely.

Sincerely,

XXXXXX


从以上的分析,我们可以将这封推荐信的总体结构表述如:



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